Reheating the Chicken

February 2, 2007, 1:36 pm

Reheating the Chicken Ruts in the map are places Ive been static under dribbling skies, wondering where to go. Your eyes linger on me, again- as if I were a primary color only you perceive. I could...

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Re: Reheating the Chicken

February 2, 2007, 9:50 pm

Yoly, I love this! so many thoughts that surface while waiting on the chicken to reheat. . . and I especially love the opening stanza - - very original and pulled me right in.enjoyed this very...

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Re: Reheating the Chicken

February 2, 2007, 10:22 pm

Hi Yolee,Must agree with Tammy. This is so lovely and original with its keen details and phrasing. I love the way your meld color, sentiment and action in this piece. There are so many things to pick...

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Re: Reheating the Chicken

February 2, 2007, 11:44 pm

your sounds and rhythm, and very imaginative metaphors are a delight. i have to reread this. regardsedenNavel Orange

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Re: Reheating the Chicken

February 3, 2007, 1:35 am

Oh Yolee, what a wonderful write.I love the sounds, (you've got a great internalear) and the unique phrasing and metaphors.Enjoyed this much, kerri

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Re: Reheating the Chicken

February 3, 2007, 4:19 am

yes...enjoyed...for the same reasons the others did...

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Re: Reheating the Chicken

February 3, 2007, 10:14 pm

Hi Tam-I'm glad this pulled you in.Thank you for stopping in and letting me know.Hi Wendy-Your reading is always a pleasure to take in.Thank you for the kinds words.Hi Eden-I'm thrilled that you want...

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Re: Reheating the Chicken

February 5, 2007, 3:25 pm

.wonderful title.the language seems to snap back and forthbetween an easy familiarity and a more interpretiveobservational mode. this added an unexpecteddynamic for me. sense inputs and relational...

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